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Don’t you see?
What I want forever?
We’re in this together,
though endings do end,
though nights are days,
you and me, what I want forever.

Heart and soul, its ice and snow,
Lavishing attention,
Darkness ascension,
Don’t you see, its dark in me?
Though dark is light
Though death is life.

Killing for touch,
Murdering for love,
Touching for lies,
Loving for nothing,
Look at those lucky eyes!

I see it all, all as one,
What you cant see I’ll show,
It’s a void,
Want to go in together?
To bad, because we’re in this together!
You lost control.
You lost control.
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:icontechno-zombie:
really well done, the rhyming really brings it together nicely.
i also love how through each stanza it gets darker and darker, and then at the end it sums it up brilliantly :)

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...in the bathroom, with the nail scissors


That's one letter off being a very naughty word...

Self appointed head lifeguard of the human genepool.
:iconstrangewolf:
man sometimes i wonder if you're ok

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"Come to Me, step further into my nakedness
Caress me in your breasts of Fire"

"Breed my flame, have no fear or weakness
I welcome you in my hole of desire"

"Have me now, Prince, have me here"
Your beg still whispers in my ear

Moonspell
:iconvictorraven:
Thanks, and thats what I was going for!

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Life is a Void
There is nothing but chaos that surronds you
Give int the void, for if you fight
only death will await
Join VR
Serve absolustion.
:iconvictorraven:
lol
fine
I just cant do happy poems, I mean thier so not as cool.

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Life is a Void
There is nothing but chaos that surronds you
Give int the void, for if you fight
only death will await
Join VR
Serve absolustion.
:iconstrangewolf:
cool man, just dont cut yourself like the emo kids

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"Come to Me, step further into my nakedness
Caress me in your breasts of Fire"

"Breed my flame, have no fear or weakness
I welcome you in my hole of desire"

"Have me now, Prince, have me here"
Your beg still whispers in my ear

Moonspell
:iconenemystripe:
"..." indeed.

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Lost in Acre. Send Help.
:icontechno-zombie:
well you did it really well! :D

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...in the bathroom, with the nail scissors


That's one letter off being a very naughty word...

Self appointed head lifeguard of the human genepool.
:iconvictorraven:
What have you been up to?

--
Life is a Void
There is nothing but chaos that surronds you
Give int the void, for if you fight
only death will await
Join VR
Serve absolustion.
:iconvictorraven:
^__^

--
Life is a Void
There is nothing but chaos that surronds you
Give int the void, for if you fight
only death will await
Join VR
Serve absolustion.

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